Wednesday, July 12, 2006

alone together



"I love your eyelashes" D said
And ran his finger over them
He stared at her face until T opened her eyes
To look straight into M
M smiled
Just the lift of one corner of his mouth
His secret smile for her
Her accomplice, her lover, her love
She smiled back
D gave a small laugh and looked away
Who was he trying to kid
He smiled at R sitting across the table
And acknowledged his "I told you so" look
And together they went back to watching people
Running about in the bustling station
And tried their best to ignore
the lovers melting between them

5 Comments:

Blogger goldfluke said...

This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.

12/7/06 4:42 PM  
Blogger goldfluke said...

my version called: alphabets

"I love your eyelashes" A said

And ran his finger over them

He stared at her face until B opened her eyes

To look straight into C

C smiled

Just the lift of one corner of his mouth

His secret smile for her

Her accomplice, her lover, her love

She smiled back

E gave a small laugh and looked away

Who was she trying to kid

She smiled at F sitting across the table

And acknowledged his "I told you so" look

Together they went back to watching people

Running about in the bustling station

The lovers melting between them

12/7/06 4:43 PM  
Blogger ± said...

intense.alphabetically and otherwise.
but does so much of love actually exist?
and why is there always someone who is a loser, when two lovers win.
many questions... many more popping up... but that does not take away from the fact that its a beautiful post...

:-)

write more often. write a short story.. you'll do a wonderful job...

12/7/06 8:00 PM  
Blogger velvetgunther said...

ah, ok

12/7/06 11:04 PM  
Blogger justme said...

whom are they trying to kid?
Ignore them?

love has melted

14/7/06 7:04 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home